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Rick Lewis's avatar

Ok, but with an opening scene like that I need the rest of the story. Next installment please!

Charlie Bleecker's avatar

Hahaha the how I envisioned it going section was priceless.

Haley Brengartner's avatar

This left me giddy. The opening scene had so much pizzaz. Wonderful job, Alex . Wonderful job.

Paul Michael's avatar

There's got to be more to the story. Although I already know it, I haven't yet read about it, and it begs for more.

Maps's avatar

That last sentence! 🤣